http://kindredinkwriters.forumotion.net/cadence-f10/-t1.htm Meaningful, deliberate rhythms and pauses that cause writing to flow smoothly, and carry tone; mixed with syntax, cadence often expresses the writer or character's voice. Sun, 23 Nov 2008 06:49:11 GMT 10 http://jaebaeli.com/KIWI/kiwilogo2.png http://kindredinkwriters.forumotion.net/cadence-f10/-t1.htm http://kindredinkwriters.forumotion.net/cadence-f10/i-heard-you-the-first-time-t11.htm Jae Baeli ...Repetition as enemy to style and cadence. Even great writers make mistakes. I can usually tell when it's an editing oversight, or the fault of the author. An editor's oversight seems a simultaneous contradiction, in that it can mean "overlook", but also "seeing-over," as in monitoring--same word, two opposite meanings. Accordingly, when I use the word "mistake" in this context, it doesn't necessarily imply the condition of being WRONG. I use the word, "mistake" ... Cadence Sun, 23 Nov 2008 06:49:11 GMT http://kindredinkwriters.forumotion.net/cadence-f10/i-heard-you-the-first-time-t11.htm#12 http://kindredinkwriters.forumotion.net/cadence-f10/i-heard-you-the-first-time-t11.htm